Hmm, i liked it.

But i feel Horkon's constant mental stabs at becky's hygiene is a little... Too much.

You see, it feels like it's gone past "She disgusts me" and past, "I hate her filth with a passion" and bordering on a psychotic monologue.

Maybe it's just me, but in all my reading, only serial killers sizing up their next victims spend so much time trying to convince themselves that they are the scum of the earth. And while Horkon is an assassin, he seems a lot more benevolent than he lets on. Say what he will, if he truly thought she was as disgusting as he says, he wouldn't have wasted time trying to clean off her rear. the ONE place which will be caked in shit the next morning. And if her emissions are anything to go by, maybe even earlier.

And about Becky herself... you've spent so much time detailing how much she's been farting and pooping, as well as how thick she is but has she actually EATEN anything over the course of the story? What does she even eat? or is that another spoiler?

Im interested in where this story would go... I think i mentioned a whole long time back that this is my favorite series of yours... I can't wait for the next part!